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  • 枫下拾英 / 心情随笔 / 闲人偶深夜无事写了4首中文诗,大家投票你们想要看那一首。。。。投票多的我会分享出来求点评。。。只1首, 无它, just for fun ~ 大家请跟帖写出1,2,3,4中的一个数字。。。 +1
    • 4 +2
      • 坐等看你和楼下谁得分多。。。LOL
    • 没看到照片,也捧场:3 +1
      • 你没看到啊,等明年吧。。。谢捧场
    • 抗议,必须四首都分享出来
      • 这这这不好
        • 再抗议
          • 淘气~
            • 继续抗议
              • 上次那几句关于hope的英文,并不是我写的,是Emily Dickinson的一首诗里的几句
                • 上次的错过了,这次不能错过
                  • 错过什么?
                    • 错过那个hope啊
                      • Hope is the thing with feathers that perches in the soul - and sings the tunes without the words - and never stops at all.
                        • 让我崇拜一下
    • 5 +1
      • 5大概要再等一周
    • 都贴出来吧
      • 瑕疵太多,一首就够丢人了 +1
        • 狮子多了不咬

          写诗最重要的就是大胆

          哪怕诗真的没那好,比勇气肯定盖过了所有人

    • 2 +1
      • 你们真是难为我,每个人弄个数
        • 等等看谁的点赞多 +1
          • 嗯,晚上再来check。。。走了
    • 我选1😜 +1
      • 又来个淘气的
        • 😜😜 +1
    • 来了,希望大家喜欢 +3

      年纪渐长,慢慢的爱上诗歌,我愿余生用诗歌记录我的欢笑痛苦点点滴滴,不为其他,只为留下一点点我曾经来过的痕迹~

      Nov 17, 2021

      风来的时候

      雪也来陪伴

      没有声音的夜晚

      鸡尾酒是心灵的良伴


      自由是没有爱

      还是太多爱

      欢笑是因为得

      还是不在意得


      我的世界在你的纵容下

      光芒万丈

      我的心在你的放任下

      丰盈如脂

      • 不错,相伴确无羁绊,爱的最高境界。 +1
        • ~~~
      • 让我想起了一首歌里唱的 “听,雪落下的声音”
        • 那首歌我也听过啊。。。我总是不满意自己的诗,语言贫瘠没法完全的表达
      • 意境自然,感情丰满。小Justin陪乐独到。打分:95! +2
        • 谢谢,会努力~
          • 非常不错了!如果开照片,就给100分!
            • 谢谢,100分太高,95分正好:)那个照片都不是全身。。。算了,以后有机会的
      • 很不错,有意境 +1
        • 谢谢才女~
    • 昨天读了一首好诗,分享一下

      Remember 

      BY CHRISTINA ROSSETTI

      Remember me when I am gone away,

      Gone far away into the silent land;

      When you can no more hold me by the hand,

      Nor I half turn to go yet turning stay.

      Remember me when no more day by day

      You tell me of our future that you plann'd:

      Only remember me; you understand

      It will be late to counsel then or pray.

      Yet if you should forget me for a while

      And afterwards remember, do not grieve:

      For if the darkness and corruption leave

      A vestige of the thoughts that once I had,

      Better by far you should forget and smile

      Than that you should remember and be sad.

      • Bob Moorehead > Quotes > Quotable Quote “The paradox of our time in history is that we have taller buildings but shorter tempers, +1
        本文发表在 rolia.net 枫下论坛wider Freeways, but narrower viewpoints. We spend more, but have less, we buy more, but enjoy less. We have bigger houses and smaller families, more conveniences, but less time. We have more degrees but less sense, more knowledge, but less judgment, more experts, yet more problems, more medicine, but less wellness.

        We drink too much, smoke too much, spend too recklessly, laugh too little, drive too fast, get too angry, stay up too late, get up too tired, read too little, watch TV too much, and pray too seldom. We have multiplied our possessions, but reduced our values. We talk too much, love too seldom, and hate too often.

        We've learned how to make a living, but not a life. We've added years to life not life to years. We've been all the way to the moon and back, but have trouble crossing the street to meet a new neighbor. We conquered outer space but not inner space. We've done larger things, but not better things.

        We've cleaned up the air, but polluted the soul. We've conquered the atom, but not our prejudice. We write more, but learn less. We plan more, but accomplish less. We've learned to rush, but not to wait. We build more computers to hold more information, to produce more copies than ever, but we communicate less and less.

        These are the times of fast foods and slow digestion, big men and small character, steep profits and shallow relationships.

        These are the days of two incomes but more divorce, fancier houses, but broken homes. These are days of quick trips, disposable diapers, throwaway morality, one night stands, overweight bodies, and pills that do everything from cheer, to quiet, to kill. It is a time when there is much in the showroom window and nothing in the stockroom. A time when technology can bring this letter to you, and a time when you can choose either to share this insight, or to just hit delete...

        Remember, to spend some time with your loved ones, because they are not going to be around forever. Remember, say a kind word to someone who looks up to you in awe, because that little person soon will grow up and leave your side.

        Remember, to give a warm hug to the one next to you, because that is the only treasure you can give with your heart and it doesn't cost a cent.

        Remember, to say, "I love you" to your partner and your loved ones, but most of all mean it. A kiss and an embrace will mend hurt when it comes from deep inside of you.

        Remember to hold hands and cherish the moment for someday that person might not be there again. Give time to love, give time to speak! And give time to share the precious thoughts in your mind.”
        看到你的诗词,想起了下面这段文字,快二十年了,重温一下下~更多精彩文章及讨论,请光临枫下论坛 rolia.net
        • So well written, especially "We've added years to life not life to years."....so true ~
          • That's what i felt! +1
      • 这诗配上今天外面的天气,感觉so sad.. +1
        • 有点blue~
        • She was brilliant
    • 投票4最多。。。Here it is, a sad one

      Sep 25,2021

      Sitting two feet from you

      My heart shaking like boiling water

      I want to flee from this moment

      Hearing the threatening words

      Denying the reality from happening

      I wish you were a stranger to me

      Tell me what you want from me

      Tell me how much more love you need

      Tell me if you still want me in your life

      Rushing out of the house like a gust

      No answer is the answer

      • 好诗
        • Thx~
      • If this is the thing happening, hug~
        • Happened....hug +1
          • 😘😘
      • I know this situation
        An employee didn't want to take the jabs. The boss was talking to him and firing him.
        • :)
      • 这个中文我不认识,不算。